The
Stolen Goods
Rough Idea |
The
characters Aje and Ronke are the two main women from the story. Aje is the poor
woman who does not have money and cannot afford a full meal; I have changed her
character to being a student living in the 21st century in Leeds.
Her character is kind, shy and quiet. She hates confrontation, her introverted
character traits allows her to focus on her work. She has a number of close
friends that she is very comfortable with and she is close to her Aunty.
Ronke is
the woman’s neighbour in the original story that seduces her neighbour with the
egusi soup she cooks everyday. Her modern character is a girl who is not aware
when she has upset someone. She does not have boundaries.
I have been
thinking about the appearance of my characters, for example I want them to wear
certain shades of colours to express their character. It is an exaggeration of
the story to really show the audience who these people are with the least
dialogue.
Ronke is
going to be wearing darker shades of yellowish green to express envy and greed.
Aje is a
gentler character so I want her colours to be white and blue. I understand that
dark blue can represent coldness but I shall be having her wear soft blue and
white.
The Girl
That Doesn’t Speak
Bola is the
daughter of Mr Akanni, her parents are separated but Bola mainly resides with
her Dad. Their relationship is very playful and more of a friendship as her Dad
does not place parental guidelines.
I stated earlier and in the image above that breaking down the story was hard and needed to be down so I could understand how to write the script and shot list better. I explain in the image how I broke down the story to understand where the main events take place or needed to take place.
I learned from doing this exercise how to structure my short story better because I did not want to spend a lot of time focusing on the backstory so getting to know each of the characters in and out helped me to try to show the audience what type of person they are.
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